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    dots Submission Name: Inside Herdots
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    Author: JamesYoung
    Elite Ratio:    1.39 - 2/5/21
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1393



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    dotsInside Herdots
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    I always watch her at school
    When she’s having fun
    But it doesn’t really matter
    I’m never gonna get my way
    Even if I admit my reasons
    Cause all I’ve got is my dreams

    Cause I can do whatever I want here
    I can make her see my way
    And I could taste her lips
    And I’m gonna be deep inside her
    And it’s gonna make her scream
    And I’ll just wake up after that dream

    I always smiled at her at school
    When she looked my way
    But I knew she didn’t care
    I was never gonna get my way
    Even if I try to explain
    After all I only need my dreams

    Cause I can do whatever I want here
    I can make her see my way
    And I could taste her lips
    And I’m gonna be deep inside her
    And it’s gonna make her scream
    And I’ll just wake up after that dream

    I wish I could see her smile at me
    Cause I only see her frown at me
    But I know she doesn’t even like me
    I will never get me way with her
    Even if I tried
    But all I really need are my dreams

    Cause I can do whatever I want here
    I can make her see my way
    And I could taste her lips
    And I’m gonna be deep inside her
    And it’s gonna make her scream
    And I’ll just wake up after that dream




    Submitted on 2009-11-23 18:59:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the cheeseyness is too off-putting.
    | Posted on 2009-11-23 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]



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