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    dots Submission Name: Leap of Faithdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Venting
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    dotsLeap of Faithdots
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    All I long for is to be heard
    is to be something
    someone
    anyone

    but who i am
    I play this game
    I put up this front

    I do my best
    I bit my lip
    helping you
    a leap of faith you could call it

    I'm lost
    For my leap of faith has failed me miserably
    I'm hurt for I jumped in a leap of faith

    No worries I am stronger from it
    I am more determined for it
    I am more motivated

    For I am not come across an obstacle I could not overcome
    Needless to say I am growing tried

    But never-mind that!!!

    My adrenaline in pumping
    Blood rushing...flowing... faster & smoother more so with each cycle it takes

    Thoughts racing with each second they twist and turn

    Nightmares become reality

    Reality becomes nightmares


    Now Lost with each twist and turn.......





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      awesome a poem in prose of an accurate process of leap and fall... that is the allegory of a leap of faith... to most... it is the hang up there at the top of the jump where the whole world falls away and the spirit of the jump takes place... some say that is true and god... i would say soft landings are your responsibility and Peter Parker is not venom, as he is so much more intelligent than the What if ...
    never mind THAT...
    to express is a leap
    perhaps your a jumper... the point i suppose is that soft landings like knowing who you are as half the battle is your biz... leap... how high and when to come back down is not your turn... so stow it... leaping off into wonder is for the patient and slow dying, they say it can offer horrible death or the honor the grace the glory even the miracle of ... well thats another soft landing... see yaaaaaaaaa.......a.a.....a.a......a...a...a .... .... a... a... a (echoed off as i leap past)
    | Posted on 2010-02-18 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]
      Struggling to find the path.... we all do.... the trick to begin with.. is knowing there is a path.... :)

    nice work Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-12-10 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]


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