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    dots Submission Name: I am the Man in the Mirrordots
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    Author: master raz
    ASL Info:    28/M/England
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 65/71/19
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsI am the Man in the Mirrordots
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    I am the sparkle, the glitz, the glamour,
    I am the childhood, left behind in Indiana,
    I am the entertainer, the singer, the dancer,
    I am the tabloids, the surgery, the cancer,
    I am the music, the awards, the top prize,
    I am the victim of many peoples lies,
    I am the father, the protector of hope,
    I am the drug addict struggling to cope,
    I am the trilby, the white socks, the glove,
    I am the teenage boy, struggling to find love,
    I am the showman, the international superstar,
    I am the man who says 'we are, who we are'
    I am Michael Jackson, who put love before success,
    I am the man in the mirror, no more, no less.




    Submitted on 2009-11-24 16:51:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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