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    dots Submission Name: Yoursdots

    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14/14/30
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 420
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 204

       It's just a cute poem I made in the girl's lockeroom :3

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    Kiss my lips,
    This love is so divine.
    All I ever wanted...
    Was to call you mine.
    Hold my hand,
    Say those three words.
    Never forget that I--
    Am Yours. <3

    Submitted on 2009-11-24 19:10:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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