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Once in a Lifetime

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 176
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Once in a Lifetime

the waves- they roll, crash & collide
as I stare into the endless eternity
of a never-ending golden horizon-
i could watch, and wait,
for miles and miles of sand, dust and dirt
of water, grass and rain-
love undying-
but even the limitless has limits
and so my eyes close
letting hope comfort my soul.

Would you take my hand,
if i began to fall?
Would you take my hand,
for no reason at all?

sand- it sifts, and slowly drips,
from my fisted hand,
till not a grain remains at all-
it was in that moment i realized
that all that was left, was in my hands
& it was sinking to the bottom of my heart,
leaving only echoes of memories in my veins
where my blood would carry your love
along the coast of where you would touch
and pump it through my heart again

but hope holds me blind,
and so my eyes remain closed
& i waste time waiting on something,
something that will never come again.

Submitted on 2009-11-25 02:08:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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