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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
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    Drowning my ear drums in aggressive lyrics, combinations of whatever you would like to call them. What would they be called? God please, answer my questions. You know the questions, the problems, the concerns, the resolutions - most importantly. Oh God please, what to do? What to do? These whatever you would call them are not helping, at all. Despite the fact that I may act like they are, I am stubborn as all sin. This you know. -there are no words. The frustration cannot be displayed. I am past that reaction, past this. All I can do now is exist. Is that good enough? Pssh, I can not convinced that it is. Convince me? Yes, that is what I want. I just want to be content. -all the time.
    That is impossible.




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      I guess wanting to be content is one of the things we do all the time, like wanting to face the right way or have more money.

    You get the Buddhist answer from me: well okay, don't take yourself so seriously and you won't feel so bad; make somebody feel good and you'll feel good yourself; and above all, pretend to meditate ....

    I am a traditional style poet who wants to read stuff that has been worked into elaborate, ornamental musical forms and elegant literary structures. You just write it all out and show it straight away. About that, I guess we have to disagree! That's my criticism of your style of composition. But it doesn't mean your way works less well! It seems to work fine, in fact ...
    | Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      I've asked those questions, was told to look for the answers in simple little everyday 'miracles' and I'd find the answers... I found, there are obviously no answers.

    But I can pose to the same questions to some bum looking for burger or wine money, and for a mere $1 bill, he will acknowledge my presence, concerns, existence, and give me an answer that I can examine and make to fit my need.

    That's why I lost respect for Gideon... he went all around the country sticking bibles in cheap motels, instead of a stack of dollar bills with the quote, "Give unto others while ye seek... and you might actually find."

    What I have found, tho, so far in my journeys: Nobody is really happy, so hey, I'm in the right canoe for this waterfall, yep...

    | Posted on 2009-11-25 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Indeed a conundrum is what being happy all the time is, the deal is that all is in balance so it has to go bad somedays to be good others, likewise be content in knowing no matter how bad things may seem that they will be counterbalanced with happiness sometime. Also know when all is well that it indeed has to be balanced by a time of unhappiness for all has to be in balance.
    | Posted on 2009-11-25 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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