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    dots Submission Name: Reversing Polarity 2dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 338
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    It has been my conclusion of late
    With a mind to watch
    And bemoan my fate
    And think only of those things I lost

    And nothing of which, to which I gained

    Yes a conclusion of late and a collusion of years
    To let me wallow in a sorrow that was not my own

    I; shame facedly have to admit, became shallow

    I let all the sunlight slip from me
    As if it was no more than wasted time
    And all the pain and hurt I felt
    Never reminded me of all the love I feel
    And that love
    Was always mine

    I do not feel though willingly
    I let my feet go astray
    Rather dazzled blindly by a morose and morass of grey
    I considered an almost bittersweet agony
    To be friendly
    In its way

    Silly me

    Silly, silly me

    I have to remind me

    Silly me

    To see everything dark and dismal
    Every burned crap carbuncle
    Like some infectious demonoid
    To encircle my life and draw my dawn to its welcoming pit

    And I sunk, scrabbling at its walls
    With some maniac hope
    Of deliverance
    And never realising that the bottomless
    Wasn’t colder than the proverbial well diggers ass
    But a mere cosset
    In which they would have me bid
    Hide my love

    And hidden it was
    Quite and enthusiastically camouflaged
    By the bemoaning of my lot

    That is
    When in reversing my polarity
    It finally came to me
    Sigh; and after, all these dumb fuck years
    Yup clever
    Smart and remarkable me
    It finally dawned on me

    Stupid, silly me

    Though I say it with a smile
    And lovingly

    “If you’re not part of the solution
    “then you’re part of the problem

    Did I want to be a problem
    Or a solution

    And after reading this poem

    Which one do you think I chose

    :)








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