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    dots Submission Name: The Unflodingdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Unflodingdots

    Do you know where you are

    Like the falling autumn leaves
    Float with their purpose
    Of rebirth

    Do you know the root
    The anchor to which your being holds
    In the Earth

    Do you know where you are

    Scattered in the clouded shafts of light
    To dance chaotic
    In the perfection

    And seeming in that instant
    Every fluctuation of your soul

    Do you know

    How the star-seed is loosed inside you
    And by its pattern forming
    Releases the distinction, of, you

    Ripples tossed in energy fields
    Harmonic with the love you feel
    Swirls inward, outward, in the configurations of your heart

    Do you know where you are

    Behind the mirrors of your perceptions
    As the world waits for you to awaken
    To love

    As if in the blossoming flower reality unfolds
    Stuff of the cosmos
    And release your hold

    You know where you are

    The eternal reaches of prime creation call
    To tweak gently at your focus

    You may cover it with a blanket of material details
    But still you know
    How these 3D animations, trap you

    Yes, you know

    It was a signal you swam through before your birth
    It was the voice, the eyes, the ears of the Universe
    And it beat, beat out loud with the sound of your mothers heart

    It held you in its infinite womb
    It holds you still
    Sacred child

    You know where you are

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