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    dots Submission Name: Great Nation of The Hoax Great Nation of Fools Or dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsGreat Nation of The Hoax Great Nation of Fools Or dots
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    ............Punch drunk

    Flag punched
    Bible punched
    Money punched
    Entertainment punched
    Gossip punched
    Work punched
    By the federal bank

    Information punched
    News punched
    Ideology punched
    Religion punched

    Punch drunk

    In your flag waving
    Biblical savings solicitudes of ignorance
    And paint the pain with pretty prose

    Follow my leader
    In fluoride
    Wave my CAT scan of enemy
    And terrorism probably

    And all for the sake of monetary wealth

    Hit the bottle
    Hit your knees
    Bend your back to the willingness of oppression
    Count your bloody stripes
    Donít count the stars
    As slaves it may be seen as sedition

    Tow the line

    Keep yourself wrapped in your drudgery
    And the cotton wool boundary
    Of an easy and fake security
    Be a slave
    Great nation of the hoax
    Great nation of fools
    Stay
    Punch drunk



    Donít rise to the challenge
    Of reality

    Eat instead
    The plastic chemical over abundance of food
    The hormone-injected burger
    The cloying sweet propaganda of coca cola

    Go ahead
    Consume

    Swallow and feed yourselves
    On the fat and liposuction dreams
    Of wealth

    Eat the shit
    In the chemical induced wastelands
    Of your dreams

    Sell your sex
    And your love
    Barter your lives for printed-paper
    To the corporate dream

    Swallow the sickness
    In its piss guile of vomit
    To delude you
    Of everything you are

    Enslave yourselves
    Or free yourselves
    The choice
    Has always
    Been
    Yours










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      Man.... I am sooo tired!! I work 3erd shift at a gas station my normal 10hrs but mmmm you got me dying to read more of your posts!! I feel like a fool to tell you this was AWESOME !!! Because I've been saying this...
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