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    dots Submission Name: From the Heartdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1012
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 701



    Description:
       Written for an exboy of mine one of the many times i thought i was "In Love".. Its acually like 2 or 3 years old but just thought i'd see what everyone thought of it.


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    dotsFrom the Heartdots
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    I'm sitting here thinking of you
    And notice how its all so true

    The way you look at me
    Opens my eyes and makes me see

    Just how much I can be loved by one
    And how lucky I am the past is done

    A promise is a dream come true
    Just think what I promised you

    But you promised me too
    And I hope it all comes true

    Lets make them all see
    How much I love you & You love me

    No matter what happens in the next few years
    I'm willing to be there throught all the tears

    I hope you know all I say is true
    Because I completly Love YOU!




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