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    dots Submission Name: Starseed Initiationdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsStarseed Initiationdots
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    Tick tock
    The cosmic clock
    Tick tock
    Tick tock

    And every Earthly human concept
    By language
    Or thought
    By perception
    And definition
    Cannot grasp
    The explanation

    Tick tock
    The cosmic clock
    Tick tock
    Tick tock

    Observation
    And the quantum connection
    Resounds inside
    The chemical building blocks
    Responding to
    Emotion

    Tick tock

    Expands the fields photon
    The great vibration
    Of Universal initiation

    Tick tock
    In time
    With the human pivot
    The starseeds
    Planted
    Fecundate

    Home, home within vast reaches
    Home within the microscopic
    All and everything
    Connected

    Awakening
    Is constantly
    Happening

    Tick tock
    The cosmic clock
    Tick tock
    Tick tock





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