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    dots Submission Name: The Gift of You...dots

    Author: Cure
    ASL Info:    24/M/BakerCity, Or
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 26/23/15
    Words: 410
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 637
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThe Gift of You...dots

    "I know not of a greater happiness than that of which you give to me…"

    So blissfully and, as if unknowingly, you so graciously bestow upon me the beauty of your smile.

    My soul begins to shine from the joy I always seem to find; gazing deep into your bright blue eyes.
    Not even the prettiest of skies are of any comparison to the true perfection of your person…

    'It is your voice: which hums a silent symphony in my ear.
    That forces the butterflies to fiercely explode within me every time you speak. Even your faintest of whispers causes my heart to skip a beet.'

    'It is your eyes: that stare back at me so contently, observing me ever persistently, watching my every thought and emotion waiting for any sine of uncertainty to come rushing to my side with an empathy beyond rivalry, the ecstasy of your gaze can be so captivatingly bright as to blind fully rob me of all control, leaving me forever motionlessly danceing to the beautifully hummed harmony of your love as we dance endlessly in the rain for all eternity...'

    'It is your touch: so soft and warm, like a gentile summer's breeze. Soothing and calming even the most vicious of my beasts.'

    As an excited shiver runs up my spine I find the bliss you always seem to bring, even in the darkest of times, and through the greatest of fears. All the love and compassion you so kindly bestow upon me always brings me to tears.

    For it is only your voice I can ever hear as I battle blindly through these crazy years,
    Through the pain, the blood, the rain and the tears; I continue this pursuit through even my darkest of unexplainable fears;
    searching for the soul that sings the endless symphony of our bliss that forever echoes within me.

    'It is your heart: and all the love that it brings. Dancing while it sings.
    Its beauty expresses so effortlessly,
    as its jumping and leaping beyond my compactly. knowing no such things as; boundaries or endings.'

    "It is you my love, your greatest gift.
    It is simply your presence and that smile you give…"

    Submitted on 2009-11-27 02:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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