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    dots Submission Name: crowndots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 368/381/224
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotscrowndots
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    `



    step forward
    chin up, back straight
    onto the stone of destiny
    plant feet firm
    and remember

    step backward
    head tilted, brow knit
    only in the mind
    return to what
    brought you here

    step aside
    shoulders squared, hips lithe
    be removed but
    be re-placed
    the river flows downstream



    `




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