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    dots Submission Name: Turn up the Volumedots
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    Author: throughmyvoice
    ASL Info:    19/f/US of A
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 69/113/51
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Happy
    Total Views: 596
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 834



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    dotsTurn up the Volumedots
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    Itís past midnight, itís winding down
    The bustle, the hustle
    Sh. Turn down the sound
    Let the breathing steady,
    Take a look around
    In the dark, in the quiet, the music can be found
    Itís thudding, my heart, the rhythm in my veins
    Pumping the melody through my fingers, coming out insane
    That ricochets my eardrums, that pours out my voice
    That lifts into melody, that flows out without my choice
    THE MUSIC I feel it, it screams and sings and shouts
    The WORDS they write themselves, the beat wraps itself around
    And all the while noone hears, in their bed, with closed up ears
    9-5 no time to thrive on this universal pulse that brings the world to life
    But my headphones never come off
    And MY music, it never stops





    Submitted on 2009-11-28 07:02:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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