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    dots Submission Name: Hot Concrete and Bonedots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    25/M/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 175/197/89
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Satire
    Total Views: 481
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsHot Concrete and Bonedots
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    Well, cities are collections
    of people I don't like,
    so I'll burn them down to the ground
    in the cover of the night,
    and then I'll set out running,
    so I can be alone,
    and leave the smoldering pile there
    of hot concrete and bone.

    Well I know it sounds like madness,
    and I admit that I'm quite mad,
    but the dilution of the gene pool
    irritates me just a tad,
    so I hardly see the trouble
    with a little genocide,
    so I'll burn down all the cities
    with the idiots still inside.




    Submitted on 2009-11-28 08:37:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Can I please, please please help???

    Fantastic. I am so there... and I have 4 gas cans, if you think that would be handy...
    | Posted on 2009-11-28 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      YES. YES. I JUST ORGASMED. YES.
    OH GOD.
    YES.
    I'm done. This was brilliant.
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    | Posted on 2009-11-28 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]


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