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    dots Submission Name: Love Did Flydots
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    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 428
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       "Gentle love did fly"


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    dotsLove Did Flydots
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    Caring heart
    harmless start
    gentle love did fly


    Longing glance
    taking chances
    riding on this high


    Tender kiss
    ageless bliss
    my soul set ablaze


    Timeless trust
    unspoken lust
    dare to ne're part ways


    Without a fear
    nota tear
    such a love so right



    Longing deep
    selfless leap
    keeper of my light


    Gazing eyes
    cheerful cries
    how I love you much


    Caressing hand
    kisses land
    never losing touch


    Time fleeting
    hearts abeating
    growing stronger e'er day


    You're mine
    we're divine
    together forever we'll stay




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