Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Love Did Flydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 460
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 870



    Description:
       "Gentle love did fly"


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLove Did Flydots
    -------------------------------------------


    Caring heart
    harmless start
    gentle love did fly


    Longing glance
    taking chances
    riding on this high


    Tender kiss
    ageless bliss
    my soul set ablaze


    Timeless trust
    unspoken lust
    dare to ne're part ways


    Without a fear
    nota tear
    such a love so right



    Longing deep
    selfless leap
    keeper of my light


    Gazing eyes
    cheerful cries
    how I love you much


    Caressing hand
    kisses land
    never losing touch


    Time fleeting
    hearts abeating
    growing stronger e'er day


    You're mine
    we're divine
    together forever we'll stay




    Submitted on 2009-11-28 14:22:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    180734

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Incubus written by monad
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Giving written by jjd
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Bond written by saartha
    To written by SavedDragon
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry