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    dots Submission Name: Empyreandots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsEmpyreandots
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    The fluctuations repeat
    Slow
    Steady
    The crystal dripping of their poignancy
    In their intention
    Reverberates

    Amongst the stars
    How the expressive expansion
    Calls you home

    A longing unknown
    Calls through the corpuscle of your sentience
    A vast configuration
    Set in motion
    Slow
    Steady

    Awaken

    And the illusion of dreams
    The facets factuality’s become
    The myriad forms of beauty

    Scattered before you the dusted heavens
    Race to meet you in joyous constellations
    Welcoming
    Recognition of this the instinctual permanent
    Home
    Of the eternal firmament

    Slow
    Steady
    Release

    Awaken

    The full glistening dances swell
    Bright cascade in a fountain tree
    This resplendent energy
    Sources its root
    In the Earth
    Me

    Awaken




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