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I Just Wanted to Help


Author: einna
ASL Info:    23/F
Elite Ratio:    5.44 - 11 /13 /14
Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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I Just Wanted to Help


I just wanted to help...
Wipe the tears from your eyes,
Hide the tears in my own;
Lift you above the sky,
While I hide under ground.
I just wanted to make you happy...
Make you smile,
Mask my own frown;
Give you a hug,
Hope it cheers us both up...
I just wanted to help,
I just wanted to help.




Submitted on 2009-11-28 22:08:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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