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    dots Submission Name: I Just Wanted to Helpdots
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    Author: einna
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    5.44 - 11/13/14
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 636
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 371



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    dotsI Just Wanted to Helpdots
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    I just wanted to help...
    Wipe the tears from your eyes,
    Hide the tears in my own;
    Lift you above the sky,
    While I hide under ground.
    I just wanted to make you happy...
    Make you smile,
    Mask my own frown;
    Give you a hug,
    Hope it cheers us both up...
    I just wanted to help,
    I just wanted to help.




    Submitted on 2009-11-28 22:08:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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