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    dots Submission Name: keep it in your pantsdots
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    Author: Mooncatcher
    ASL Info:    20 / F / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 20/37/19
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Society
    Total Views: 904
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 105



    Description:
       Some people just can't keep it in their pants


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    dotskeep it in your pantsdots
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    To poor to afford the pill too lazy to use a condom.

    1 to 6 ratio.
    Ignorant and 19.




    Submitted on 2009-11-29 01:34:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A little social commentary, eh?

    Well, I'm not going to go nonsensical...but I will say you should do more with it. Not because it is short, sometimes short works, but because this subject has a lot more to it and isn't as simple as that. Or maybe it is.

    Point is, it's a good topic.

    It's like describing describing Picasso as blue, when there's quite a bit more to him.

    I'm not sure if it's really like that...actually.

    But I'll just assume you know what I mean. :)
    | Posted on 2009-11-29 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]


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