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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet of First Meetingsdots
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    Author: gotdalife06
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 5/11/10
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 562
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSonnet of First Meetingsdots
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    Songs of old from men of years; decades past
    Men who knew not who we are, but what we
    From oceans away felt in that 'xact time.
    You of small faith in ESP and such
    Rationalize but find all but reason
    Reason for that night under the clear sky
    Drops of rum on cheap wooden tables spilt
    Drunken weakness bringing her to a tilt
    His arms precarious about her body
    His ears intent to her very last word
    You of small faith in clairvoyance and such
    Rationalize but find not rational
    The song that rang loud and no sooner found
    Fruition in the hands of two as one.




    Submitted on 2009-11-29 21:25:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you know, i never actually noticed that! hahaha! i might be obsessive-compulsive bout the number 8 and don't even know it! thank you very much for the kind comments, sir!
    | Posted on 2009-12-23 00:00:00 | by gotdalife06 | [ Reply to This ]
      You made line 8 special: a habit of yours? This time, with a rhyme.

    It's a good poem, no problem!
    | Posted on 2009-12-22 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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