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    dots Submission Name: Catching Rainbowsdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCatching Rainbowsdots
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    ( Man catches rainbow/rainbow catches man )


    Within the seascapes of sound
    Permeating frequencies
    Resolution
    Listens to the cascade of rain
    Tympani
    The orchestral made

    Sonic motions in illumination
    The falling of sunlight
    Precipitation
    To our eyes
    Within their fragments of eternity
    Only by the heart-mind-beating
    Transcribed

    They spin the naked Dervish
    In your soul
    Configuration by, tree-hand-child-mountain-see-touch-listen
    Delineates inside the expressive capacities of emotion
    This precious grasp you have
    On all those things you love

    Flood
    These invocations affricate, beginning, beginning
    Ever initiating
    Their fluid composite dances
    As you sit beneath the canopy
    Sipping on cool white wine
    Toes playing in soft white sand

    The unexpected rain shifts separated in wind drifts
    Clouds edge dazzled, cellular, caught
    To harness the tethered bow of light
    A single arch to support the sky
    Listens to the cascade of rain
    Tympani
    The orchestral made

    Fire comes in many hues
    And a breathless gasp
    Hits the wonder
    In my
    heart





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