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    dots Submission Name: Slow Matterdots
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    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSlow Matterdots
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    Introduction

    Old Catalogs

    Walls of Art

    People's Faces

    Seemingly Simple Things

    Seem Like A Chore

    Drove to

    A Mountain

    Edge

    Separation

    Doorbell

    Another Postcard

    Be Well

    Ambiguity




    Submitted on 2009-11-30 09:20:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like how this unfolds. It can carry different meanings with each read.

    Part of me feels like it's an observer at an art gallery or museum. Then the other part of me says relationships, or many of them, all with the same ending.



    Thought provoking.
    | Posted on 2009-12-01 00:00:00 | by dazy | [ Reply to This ]
      Vague, but provocative. Scattered, but insightful. Overall, a very delightful read.
    | Posted on 2009-11-30 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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