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    dots Submission Name: My Friendsdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 598
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMy Friendsdots
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    We have sat back for far too long
    Way too long

    Resting our conscience in the idolatries
    Of Government and Religion

    Too long placating ourselves with
    Such easy answers
    Convincing ourselves
    And being convinced
    And like zealots then believe we have the answer

    While the world falls apart around us
    We sit back
    Happy little subjects of the mind control
    While our water and our food
    Is poisoned

    Too long my friends
    We have denied the truth
    And counted the lies and deceits
    Of politicians and the church
    Counted them higher
    Than the truths in our hearts

    Buried under the thumb of faceless fear
    The mere threat of terrorism
    Leads us by the nose to the slaughter houses of our slavery

    This our robot ignorance and robot acquiescence
    To the control of the mass media
    As we sit there
    In our fear filled homes
    And allow ourselves to be governed and controlled
    By the greed
    Of those who have no compunction
    For the suffering they cause

    It is time my friends
    To see and realise the truth

    We are all just slaves
    To the common no good
    Handed our tiny packets of wealth
    While the rest is stored and banked
    To be sucked upon for the lavish lifestyles
    Of ego ridden
    Maniacs

    We are providing for them
    Creating, doing, building, making
    Growing, harvesting and propagating
    As they leach and rape our planet
    Through the control of their money
    Ever seeking to be richer
    While our life and our lives
    Are continually devalued
    Divided and conquered
    Is their rule

    Wake up my friends
    Who said
    And why should we
    Agree
    To buy anything
    That by our unity is given freely

    Until we see no other meaning to or in
    Life
    And so we cling to this last hope of heaven
    The better place
    When it is in “this” place
    On our Earth
    To know the meaning of “Love”

    We have become dull and listless
    Filled with this insane propaganda
    Bartering each other
    Pitted and bated against each other
    And blinded by our struggle
    Cannot see the truth

    But there is proof
    My friends
    If we look closer
    If we dig a little deeper
    Than this easy, please leave, me alone
    Acceptance





    We owe it to each other
    To stand united in and for the common good
    And share our world
    Regardless of creed, race or colour
    To raise our children by the ethos of love
    Not fear
    To give our grandchildren a future

    One thing will then lead to another

    Ask yourself this one simple question

    What happened to World Trade Centre Building “ 7 ”

    On September 11th


    “The old appeals to racial, sexual and religious chauvinism; to rabid nationalist fervour;
    are beginning not to work. A new consciousness is developing which sees the Earth as a single organism and recognises that an organism at war with itself; is doomed”

    Carl Sagan




    The truth is out there.
    Use the Internet before it is taken away from you.






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