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    dots Submission Name: past tiesdots

    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotspast tiesdots

    after all this time
    after all these days
    im still here
    i still feel the same

    walking down a new path
    i thought i would know the way
    its the same old feeling
    but its a different day

    i would id rather feel the pain
    then have no feelings at all
    im still walking through this life
    im struggling but stading tall

    i now know who will be there to catch me if i fall
    i discovered truth through all the lies
    i know who to call
    who will listen to my cries

    i can now lay to rest my sleepy eyes
    but nightmares still haunt with my old lies
    i said my goodbyes
    but to the past im tied

    Submitted on 2009-11-30 19:48:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The past my haunt you and make you feel tied but it won't always be that bad. Some day you will be able to break the chains that you are so unpleasantly bound down to. You are strong though maybe sometimes lost but in the darkness you will find a light. You may be wandering in the dark but it's that fight that you kept up within yourself that led you to the light. Don't ever forget how special and unique you are. You are the best kinds of wonderful. Long Time!!!
    | Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]

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