past ties

Author: joezwells Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 64 /79 /55 Words: 126

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past ties

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after all this time after all these days im still here i still feel the same walking down a new path i thought i would know the way its the same old feeling but its a different day i would id rather feel the pain then have no feelings at all im still walking through this life im struggling but stading tall i now know who will be there to catch me if i fall i discovered truth through all the lies i know who to call who will listen to my cries i can now lay to rest my sleepy eyes but nightmares still haunt with my old lies i said my goodbyes but to the past im tied

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The past my haunt you and make you feel tied but it won't always be that bad. Some day you will be able to break the chains that you are so unpleasantly bound down to. You are strong though maybe sometimes lost but in the darkness you will find a light. You may be wandering in the dark but it's that fight that you kept up within yourself that led you to the light. Don't ever forget how special and unique you are. You are the best kinds of wonderful. Long Time!!!

| Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]

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