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    dots Submission Name: My Only Lovedots
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    Author: Eyamma
    ASL Info:    16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 22/21/77
    Words: 300
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 701
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This was written about Kirene and I. :3 And my relationship with him. Heh.

    It's kind of two different poems, but I just made it into two different parts since they are around the same thing and it sounded better.


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    dotsMy Only Lovedots
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    I think,
    I lost you in another life.

    I believed in the power of your love.
    Of our love.
    But just as surely, our two worlds split apart.
    I wondered if I was meant to be heart broken from the start.

    Little did I know,
    Life had a plan.

    And this plan would set us both free.
    Free to love and laugh, again.
    But first we had much to face,
    And the shadow of death stretched on farther then the eye could see.

    If Id only known it was the only way,
    Maybe there wouldnt be so many scars on my heart, to this very day.

    But, here I am,
    In love with you again.
    And you, here,
    To keep watch over my day and night.
    A guardian angel.


    I think,
    I saw you in another light.

    The night your face glistened with moonlight,
    And in my throat, my voice was caught.

    I saw nothing more then a man.
    A lovely man, with those deep eyes.

    But, in the wake of your breath, and the quickening pulse of my heart,
    I simply knew;

    I loved you.

    Because, though to some, you were just a charismatic man;
    To me,
    There is not a soul in the world that is as precious to me,
    Then you were in that moment.

    A moment.
    Only one flash of light, snapping a picture in my mind that Id forever keep.
    But it was more then any word spoken, or gift that can be given.

    Because in those deep eyes,
    I saw myself through your own eyes,
    As you did in mine...

    And, in our eyes, we were so beautiful, to each other.




    Submitted on 2009-11-30 20:54:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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