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Author: MyWorld
ASL Info:    21/M/IN
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76 /99 /87
Words: 102
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Wishes don't come true
And, dreams rarely do
Suicide is but the death of hope
And, that is true
Life is pain
And, that is also true
The thoughts life brought
Were carefully thought time due
And, in the end, all it costed
Was to cause the loss of you
And, again, an awful sense
that all has since gone askew
Because when, I ought to have known
Better than to have fought
But, I was wrong.
In everything I thought I knew
I was caught and brought into
An invisible web of no logic or rationale
Incomprehensible, unsolvable by cognitive skill

Submitted on 2009-11-30 23:57:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very true..very good write.
| Posted on 2010-11-11 00:00:00 | by love_confusion | [ Reply to This ]
  mmm At first i was like huh but this is really good I enjoy the end the most! but over all I like! Your right you know... Life is Pain... and Sucide is hope... its sad but true

| Posted on 2010-07-30 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  It’s interesting, it’s like the darker definition of hope, a vision with no answer, a light growing dim, the after effects of what hope would become for most. Something so believable in the back of your mind it can’t be right but you continue until it hits you and everything you spent to work toward or accomplish gone, wasted. I like your choice of words and twist of sentences; it’s like your drawing with them. It was good.

| Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]

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