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    dots Submission Name: Gay :Ddots
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    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17/Male/In your pants.
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 21/22/17
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 995
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 476



    Description:
       I did it for comedy :D
    No mean fun Kaii?


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    dotsGay :Ddots
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    The future

    If I may say,
    Would be filled with gay.
    Lots of sparkle and glitter.
    The world would be littered!
    Golly G, rainbows would rule.
    Fan girls would drool.
    It would be happy,
    Just like your Christian Ol pappy.
    Love would be free.
    Like little trees!
    The gayness would spread,
    All over our multi colored bread.
    Cause wed all be gay.
    Thats all I must say!




    Submitted on 2009-12-01 14:14:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A world full of buggery, so tasteful well done my dear! there is nothing wrong with flamboyant shame! Trimalchiofatt.com
    | Posted on 2009-12-01 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2009-12-01 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]


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