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    dots Submission Name: The Catdots
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    Author: Zai
    ASL Info:    24/m/US
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 66/145/98
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 605
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 302



    Description:
       Yay, random made up on the spot poems on Facebook. I thought it was hilarious at the time. >_>


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    dotsThe Catdots
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    He was a strange one.
    Had a nose the size of an emaciated peanut.
    And a tail no longer then hard boiled eggs.
    He was a strange one, no doubt.
    With his black forrest ham paws,
    and his incessant built in noise maker.
    He was a strange one, no doubt about it.




    Submitted on 2009-12-01 21:03:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Dwl
    | Posted on 2011-04-02 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL! This cheered me up! :D
    | Posted on 2011-02-16 00:00:00 | by ShadowsnLights | [ Reply to This ]
      Crazy crazy imagery, hard boiled eggs? Haha so his tail was short and stubby? Weird [censored]. Anyways this was rather refreshing and i cant really say more about it because it is rather too random for my mind to process haha! Thanks for sharing this wild [censored] with us lol!
    | Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      Sound the like the bold and the ugly i like it! well done. Trimalchiofatt.com
    | Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]


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