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    dots Submission Name: Equilibrium of Beingdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsEquilibrium of Beingdots

    Reaching upon the heady calling; outward
    Such an illustrated perfection
    Of fractal unity designed
    Of the mysticism of creation
    This quiet voice inside the heart
    Reverberating, sending its consistencies; of love

    Internal, propounds the finite birth
    Initiations seat within the fields cosmic
    Divulged by conscious act
    To become
    Both there and here
    In their inseparable energies

    Trigger of the Starseed
    From darkness into light in the beginning
    Rushing through the pupils of these eyes
    Transudation of interpretation
    Designates its, this of material illusion

    The experimental postulation
    Of this, its own fabric corporeality
    In each reflection of the myriad forms
    Of ordered chaos
    Into total spiritual equilibrium

    Separated to experience
    The heat of the sun
    The ever evolving manifestation
    Of Universal cause and will
    To exist; become

    Existence by the emotive threads

    Linger as a tasted kiss upon these lips
    With all the beauty of the Earth
    The green fronds of palms, glisten
    Dappling the playing shadows
    On a luminous field of grass
    While the sea shifts on a silver wake
    Expands to blue
    Wisp white clouds float in their fleets

    All in an instant

    Gathers up the perception of finite cells
    Streams of recognition
    Flow inward toward their blessing
    And the all encompassing monument of life
    Inside us all
    Is breathing

    Starseed trigger
    From darkness into light
    As it was
    In the beginning

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