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    dots Submission Name: Is This How We Say “Goodbye”dots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIs This How We Say “Goodbye”dots

    For the last time
    I closed my eyes and hung all my prayers on hope
    Closed my eyes
    And held you

    For the last time
    I poured my soul
    Into the aching balm of you
    And burned away the pain in us both

    For the last time
    I confessed and revealed
    My every strength
    My every weakness
    Lay myself naked
    And relinquished
    The final time
    I let myself be loved
    And loved in return

    For the last time
    I posed my breath upon you
    And breathed with the un-capitulated
    Of those who desire the most
    To hold and possess you
    Wrote the screaming want of you upon your skin
    And tore at the animal
    To hear you sigh and moan
    Call out my name
    For the last time

    I bathed in your sexual unbridled beauty
    And touched within the essence of you
    To scorch in the flames
    Writhing, devoured in the beat
    And arched back of our sweat
    Pinned to my bed
    For the last time
    I tied you naked
    To my wrists
    And caught your every gasp and pant
    And had your fingers tips
    And the quiver of your lips
    Partake and etch their secret language
    On my soul

    For the last time
    To the succour of my heart
    For the last time
    I travelled upon your skin
    And reached the quiet whisper
    For the last time
    The whisper said “ ONE ”

    The last time
    We made love

    For the first time I let slip
    The tethers made in my heart

    For the first time
    I did not think of you

    Submitted on 2009-12-02 07:56:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HOLY SHIT!!! this here is ....is...is where are my words this is amazing although it was long it still... you still had me intertwined within your thoughts your mind... wowowowowowow... you have great talent don't allow anyone to ever tell you different!!!!!!!!

    | Posted on 2009-12-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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