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    dots Submission Name: The Sweet Tenderness of a Kissdots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    18/girlie/utah
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/58/73
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 515
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThe Sweet Tenderness of a Kissdots
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    I've kissed and have been kissed

    But your kiss was something new

    Your kiss was something different

    There was something else about your kiss

    That made it into a mystery I had to solve

    So I kissed you more and more

    Having this need to find the clues to solve this little wonder

    Yet I still could not solve the reason I was so attracted to you

    What made me fall so deep into weakness for you...

    Your breathe so sweet and so very irresistible like the sweetest honey

    Your smell it was so alluring and wonderful like from a new world

    Your touch so soft and delicious like the petals of a red rose

    Your eyes are such a deep beautiful brown its like warm hot chocolate

    Your lips...your lips I'm yearning for..your mystery sealed into a perfect shaped heaven

    Running through my mind is you...all I want now is you...

    Yours warm arms around me, holding me close

    This is what I want...this is what I need

    I need his mysterious love that grabbed hold on my heart

    And refused to let go, this strange...

    Love at first site...first touch...first everything




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