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My Own Light


Author: SilentDreams42
Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38 /30 /42
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I'm not afraid anymore, and I feel great.


My Own Light



Once lost amid the cosmos
Tangled in the stars
Reliant on all that was known to be true
Blinded

But the universe has found me
As I am finding myself
Deep within this galaxy of ours
Astonished

5 days
120 hours
7200 minutes
432000 seconds

Finally…
Independence

For the stars, they never lie




Submitted on 2009-12-04 23:23:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love this poem. it reminds me of our song


| Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  I loved reading this. It show's that there is always hope and we should't give up on anything. You write very well, too. It was nice to read what you wrote.

And I agree with what you say here. I've always been obsessed with the stars and I've even said before how they never lied. My friend agrees and thinks the same. There are more to stars then what meets the eye. You can find any answer in them.

Keep on writing. I can't wait to read more from you.
| Posted on 2009-12-05 00:00:00 | by Vermalin | [ Reply to This ]
  Good that you feel great!
I love the calculations, its intelligent.

Awesome write.

Buster
| Posted on 2009-12-05 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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