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    dots Submission Name: My Own Lightdots
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    Author: SilentDreams42
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38/30/42
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 666
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 427



    Description:
       I'm not afraid anymore, and I feel great.


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    dotsMy Own Lightdots
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    Once lost amid the cosmos
    Tangled in the stars
    Reliant on all that was known to be true
    Blinded

    But the universe has found me
    As I am finding myself
    Deep within this galaxy of ours
    Astonished

    5 days
    120 hours
    7200 minutes
    432000 seconds

    Finally…
    Independence

    For the stars, they never lie




    Submitted on 2009-12-04 23:23:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this poem. it reminds me of our song


    | Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved reading this. It show's that there is always hope and we should't give up on anything. You write very well, too. It was nice to read what you wrote.

    And I agree with what you say here. I've always been obsessed with the stars and I've even said before how they never lied. My friend agrees and thinks the same. There are more to stars then what meets the eye. You can find any answer in them.

    Keep on writing. I can't wait to read more from you.
    | Posted on 2009-12-05 00:00:00 | by Vermalin | [ Reply to This ]
      Good that you feel great!
    I love the calculations, its intelligent.

    Awesome write.

    Buster
    | Posted on 2009-12-05 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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