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    Author: kristian
    ASL Info:    30/male/modesto, ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 71/44/29
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    trapped by my actions
    caged by my fate
    but once I accepted my weaknesses
    they became my greatest strength
    alcoholic torture was the name of the game
    if you got to close you would be burned by the flame
    but all that experience has set me free
    when I use it as 12 step work 4 someone in need
    I caused a lot of heart ache and pain
    lost and lonely definitely insane
    but thanks to aa there is a purpose in my name
    thanks you aa




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