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    dots Submission Name: Conduit Fluxiondots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsConduit Fluxiondots
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    Flow
    Always the flow
    Merging to the inward seat
    Central
    Sits with
    This consciousness

    Every aspect twists and spirals in
    No point
    No desire
    No emotion
    Without meaning
    Each as indivisible
    In flesh and spiritual
    Ethereal and Physical
    Integral
    One to other
    Cannot be more or less
    Than the other

    Flow
    Forever the flow
    Fluxing upon the inward seat
    Primal key
    Held within
    This consciousness

    From inner to outer
    To the edge and instantaneous
    Draws back again
    Flow
    To eternal motion
    Swirls
    Interlinking

    Mediations of light ricochet
    From the field reflective sea
    Dancing upon the sun
    Breathing slow the panorama
    I fold inside the geometry

    Shri Yantra unveils
    The coruscated exhibition
    Almost there
    Almost there
    In the flicker of the unified
    Awakens
    The final touch resounds
    Attended
    Focused
    Hits the centre
    And I am contemplating the life around me
    The ocean of love
    That surrounds me

    Conduit
    Fluxion
    To the grasping
    Of
    Eternity
















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