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    dots Submission Name: Conduit Fluxiondots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsConduit Fluxiondots

    Always the flow
    Merging to the inward seat
    Sits with
    This consciousness

    Every aspect twists and spirals in
    No point
    No desire
    No emotion
    Without meaning
    Each as indivisible
    In flesh and spiritual
    Ethereal and Physical
    One to other
    Cannot be more or less
    Than the other

    Forever the flow
    Fluxing upon the inward seat
    Primal key
    Held within
    This consciousness

    From inner to outer
    To the edge and instantaneous
    Draws back again
    To eternal motion

    Mediations of light ricochet
    From the field reflective sea
    Dancing upon the sun
    Breathing slow the panorama
    I fold inside the geometry

    Shri Yantra unveils
    The coruscated exhibition
    Almost there
    Almost there
    In the flicker of the unified
    The final touch resounds
    Hits the centre
    And I am contemplating the life around me
    The ocean of love
    That surrounds me

    To the grasping

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