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    dots Submission Name: noctournal loverdots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 631
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 625



    Description:
       Wrote this when my boyfriend was doing an overnight. I missed him.


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    dotsnoctournal loverdots
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    Gone again
    Love so newly found
    I lay awake and sigh
    watching the snow fall outside
    When daylight comes you will return to me
    embracing me once again
    My sweet noctournal lover
    you battle the moon
    until daylight begins
    the contented sleepiness
    of being in your arms
    fades with you into the night
    replaced by wakeful longing
    with a shorter end in sight
    days had passed before I saw my sweet lover
    now I wait only hours
    at sunrise you will return to me
    He battles the moon
    So my longing can end




    Submitted on 2009-12-07 10:44:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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