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    dots Submission Name: finding meaningdots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 642
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    Description:
       feeling a little lost one night, then started thinking about the baby.


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    dotsfinding meaningdots
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    Snow flies
    Sparkling lights hung everywhere
    A beautiful feeling of Christmas
    Joins the chill in the air
    My soul is nowhere to be found
    My body alone sits to stare
    From the home of my family
    to the home of my love
    I don't truly belong anywhere

    This year I decorate no Christmas tree
    there is no place I seem to fit
    I only know my pain will end
    when I recieve my most precious gift

    She moves around inside me
    and my faith is restored anew
    It is by Grace that my loneliness ends

    She is where I belong
    She is my daughter
    with her birth I find new meaning
    and my soul can begin to mend




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