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    dots Submission Name: El Dudar de la Isladots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEl Dudar de la Isladots

    A solitary Island
    Where nothing is known
    You are alone

    Alone amidst the multitude
    Who make this place their home

    El Dudar de la Isla
    Where you can rest upon conciliate sands
    Beneath the rugged cliffs
    Where from their precipice others leap

    Alone amidst the multitude
    Who make this place their home

    El Dudar de la Isla
    Where everything can be ignored
    A paradise of non-committal
    Despite the fact you are bored
    And where faith is just a word

    El Dudar de la Isla
    Its sea a cosseted sanctuary
    But its convoluted granite continues with a reminder
    Of the prison of your liberty

    Alone amidst the multitude
    Who make this place their home

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