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Submission Name: for ken. dots

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Author:	narcolepsy
ASL Info:	19/F/Pa
Elite Ratio:	3.97 - 129/135/60
Words:	47

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nostalgia
Total Views:	559
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for ken. dots

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i don't know what you're torn between
i cannot see it
all i can do is feel

but i can see your wings.

if our connection is real
it will never break
if our love is strong
nothing is at stake.

understand, my angel.

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