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Almighty Power

Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
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Words: 119
Class/Type: Prose /Serious
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the humble ones will possess the earth!

Almighty Power

Almighty power

you have it for victory as i for glory,
the iron-maiden of my son tonight with ending stories,
as only now do i begin to see the gore,
Oh my father, holy ghost!
why partake a game in bloodsport?
lying sleep to idle dreams:A'goat!

patience walking vastly through the corridor,
but say,"for a second sound of hell...i'll race you to the door,
everlasting are the joys as we stumble and we fall,
grounded to the particle and song,
sweetpoems of the muses 9, tonight!

we will sleep to be no more,
as we see who wait's behind the door,
we have it for POWER, he has it for us!!

Submitted on 2009-12-09 11:31:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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