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    dots Submission Name: Under Submission (working title)dots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 52/99/124
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 805



    Description:
       couldn't think of anything else to name it haha.. have any ideas let me know!!!


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    Legs shaking, ready for the give,
    An explosion erupts, from deep within.
    Screaming passion, with soft cries,
    Enjoying every bit, I can see it in her eyes.
    Pushing down, rocking her hips,
    Caressing her body, licking her lips.
    Pulling out, moving in,
    Giving in to this dark sin.
    Building up, I see it in her face,
    Strapping down her hands, with silk white lace.
    She pulls the strings, and begins to scream.
    Turning red, fulfilling her dreams.
    Melting under my body, pressing onto hers,
    She whispers in my ear, as her body starts to pur.
    "Again!" She says. I'm but a slave,
    So for her I must behave.
    I pull her hair, and make her cream,
    One more time, she lets out a scream.




    Submitted on 2009-12-10 14:52:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the title- it definitly works! It looks like a lot of commas but other than that- I really enjoyed it. Thanks for getting me hot first thing in the morning!
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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