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My Dreams always become yours!!

Author: Evie
ASL Info:    19/f/oh
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 80 /84 /30
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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uuhh crazy mother in laws i am mad. me an my fiance are expecting our first child and she is making it hell to pay saying oh the kid will be with her all the time and that basically we won't be able to take care of our own child and before i even got the chance to tell anyone she had already spilled the sex to the whole family and it drives me nuts she bought a crib for her house and expects us to let the baby go home with her after its born so that we can go home and rest umm no way not happening and she invites herself to my appointments and said she is going to be in the delivery room uuuuuuhhhhhhhhh why can't i just stick up for myself and tell her to STOP!!!

My Dreams always become yours!!

What is the point in having my own thoughts
when they will always become your ideas.
What is the point in having my own dreams
they always seems to find their way to becoming yours.
What is the point in having my own news
it always seems to find a way of becoming yours.
What is the point in having my own child
i bet that in some way it will become yours too!
Have you ever thought to let someone else be in
the spotlight for once... that maybe perhaps its not
always about you.
Have you ever in your life thought of someone else
besides when you took my job my fiance and everything else to.
What more can I possibly have that one day will no longer be just mine!!!

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