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    dots Submission Name: A poem of bigger thingsdots

    Author: AnEggScentTrick
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsA poem of bigger thingsdots

    I understand better now; relevance is relative
    Context is conditional, itís all matter and mannerism
    Perception is often more in what it isnít

    Donít assume that light is a stream that will always carry you
    Or that understanding is more a use when met with validation
    Life is not a series of words nor a contest of weaving preexistent correlations
    Threads that fray may not have had a purpose
    there is no contingency in the hypothetical
    All is dust, but it may be beautiful regardless of worldly stipulation
    There is no logistical manner, to filter fact and imagination

    Not with worldly eyes
    Not with worldly sights
    Not with worldly minds

    If there is no choice but to spin
    then rest your heart in those places
    that bare no over burdened connotation
    Accept only the beauty of this kaleidoscope
    And forever marvel at this borrowed sense of color
    universe wonít respond to these arguments of your placement

    Do not mistake the meter for the matter
    All that was ever quintessential is love
    This plane is a place to gather our senses,
    To learn our hearts, to distinguish direction
    And it serves no purpose to thirst for but itís quench,
    destroy our lives in search of what the wreckage might have meant
    Constantly analyze the structure and forget the joy we once found in it

    All that matters absolutely is love
    All that matters by all means is love
    All that truly matters is love

    Beauty has never found me in sight,
    I know itís expanse not by thought
    No words could serve itís purpose
    But it is our blessing to be so small

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      powerful. like a good long look in the mirror.
    | Posted on 2009-12-15 00:00:00 | by DestroyOhBoy | [ Reply to This ]

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