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    dots Submission Name: Simplicity of Unending Possibilitiesdots

    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSimplicity of Unending Possibilitiesdots

    Simplicity found
    Just to be later lost
    World spinning
    First in an uphill whirlwind
    Then in a calming twirl
    Later into a vicious tornado
    Going with the motions
    Without even thinking twice
    Allowing yourself to be
    Swept up in it all
    Not thinking about
    The outcomes, not once
    Letting the emotions fill you
    No matter the good, the bad
    The love, the hatred
    Allowing the butterflies
    To carry you away
    To a world where
    Nothing else matters
    But the embrace of
    His arms around you
    A place where no tear
    Can wash away the good
    A land where no person
    can steal your happiness
    A mystical island
    To escape in his arms
    Where you letting
    The euphoria outweigh it all
    Where the complicate spinning
    Trashes you into
    The puffy clouds
    Of unending possibilities

    Submitted on 2009-12-12 00:37:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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