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    dots Submission Name: Dont tell medots

    Author: dreamer37517
    ASL Info:    25/F/Bama
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 161/149/49
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 618
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 486

       I know its short, just random. Plan on adding more possibly, just putting it out there from some feedback, if any.

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    dotsDont tell medots

    Dont tell me that you love me
    Dont just say it as a rush.
    I want to see it when you look at me
    To feel it in your touch.

    Dont tell me that you love me
    Dont just say it to my face.
    I want to taste it in your kisses
    To smell it in your embrace.

    Dont tell me that you love me
    I want to hear and know its true.
    Just give me these real reasons
    To trust your "I love you".

    Submitted on 2009-12-12 01:53:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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