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    dots Submission Name: The Sexual Expression of Implode Desiredots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Sexual Expression of Implode Desiredots

    One must take
    One must give
    Equilibrium exists
    Within desire

    And both express
    From one centre
    To the other
    The fullness of passions fire

    Duality reaches toward completion
    The fullness replete
    In physical expression
    And cries out its want

    Both given
    Both taken
    In the heat and sweat
    Both a mastery in their slavery
    One to the other

    And driven by hunger
    To that quaking explosion
    Reach release
    Without wall or barrier defined

    The self implode of desire
    Quivers naked
    Abandoned and unrelenting
    In its giving and taking

    Duality reaches toward completion
    The conclusion replete
    In the flames of want
    And sighs upon the fire

    It is animal
    Burning sacrament of flesh made whole
    To taste the implode desire

    It is spiritual
    To scorch by love
    Reach release
    Without wall or barrier defined

    Submitted on 2009-12-12 13:13:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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