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This was written for my aunts breast cancer services.
We only have one chance in life
In life to complete what we were sent here for
To see how far we can go
to reach for that shinning star
We need to take care of ourselves
For itís what drives us to where we need to go
And the strength we have inside
Can shine for everyone to know
But if we neglect our health
How can we reach that shining star
How can we raise our children
And show them they can go far
Show them that life was made for them
And in you they will see a glance
Of how amazing you are
Isnít this worth one chance?
Submitted on 2009-12-14 01:34:29
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i think in response to this poem yeah though i walk through the valley of the shadow i fear no evil for thou art with me,,,
poetics here would be i lost my grandma to cancer...
and love good poem...
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To help others you must first help yourself.
I love that saying. Just don't help yourself too much I guess.
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