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    dots Submission Name: Moderately Bipolardots
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    Author: shannanigan
    ASL Info:    21 Female
    Elite Ratio:    3.48 - 47/61/14
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsModerately Bipolardots
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    Before you get to know me,
    I am really quite demure;
    you may believe I'm stolid
    when I'm only just unsure--

    Unsure of how you'll view me,
    inhibitions cast aside;
    for when I'm effervescent,
    no portion of me can hide.

    Warm and cool are trying traits
    to install into my brain;
    excitement and depression
    take precedence over sane.

    But, if you become my friend,
    hot and cold will blend to be
    a quirk reminiscent of
    ephemeral sanity.




    Submitted on 2009-12-14 06:33:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have BPD and Bi-Polar. Very relatable aswell as well written. I wouldn't change much, I kinda just wanted more. I felt like it wasn't done. Other than that Killa.
    | Posted on 2009-12-16 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]
      very fine and nifty poem, with good rhyme and good meter througout. and an exellent piece of self revealation.... loved it!!!
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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