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    dots Submission Name: sparkledots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 577
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 398



    Description:
       I <3 him.
    "..you're the dream that I've been chasing after years of waiting for a chance to finally shine. evryone calls you amazing. I just call you mine."
    -Martina Mcbride-


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    dotssparkledots
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    Your eyes.
    the blue inside.
    The way they sparkle when you laugh.
    and dim out in the night.

    Your smile.
    The way it lights up your face.
    you can shine it all the time.
    it won't take up space.

    your heart.
    the way I can feel it beat.
    the way you breathe in and out.
    it makes me complete.





    Submitted on 2009-12-14 08:31:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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