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    dots Submission Name: Obama’s Toiletdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsObama’s Toiletdots
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    And once again we see the lies and deceit of the ruling class

    Making promise never intended to keep
    In fact
    Doing just the opposite

    Once again we see the hope and wish of the American people
    Betrayed
    By the power hungry and money ridden
    Lizards of gluttony

    More weapons
    More occupation
    More Americans bleeding and dieing
    For constructed wars and conflicts

    And in secret
    They build their concentration camps
    And stock pile coffins

    In secret they tell us Fluoride is good
    And add it to your water
    You drink it
    Do you have a choice ?

    More brainwashed Americans
    Walking into destruction
    As they wave their patriotic flag
    More fathers and mothers
    Bleeding on the fields
    Of political money domination

    Barack Obama the last great hope of America
    The last white elephant
    They will ever believe in
    As their homes
    And minds are controlled
    And the real force of the Patriots Acts
    Take a hold

    And when at last the veil slips from your eyes
    America
    It will it be too late

    New World Order
    Born in America
    And martial law is on its way

    The same families have been ruling you
    For centuries
    Open your eyes
    Americans
    There are so many deceptions and lies
    You give power to

    So much you accept
    Without ever having thought about
    The interconnecting links between
    The secret societies and your government

    Barack Obama
    Will lead you into
    The prison world
    Of The New World Order

    It is your sons and daughter
    Who will have to live
    With consequences
    Of your apathetic

    NON ACTION

    WHAT IS THE TRUTH
    ABOUT 9 11

    There is no such thing
    As global terrorism
    The reality is
    That by your own willing ignorance and fear

    THEY HAVE YOU UNDER CONTROL

    Wake up America
    The land of the free is a myth
    You are the greatest nation of the befooled
    Existing on this planet
    Socio political and religious oppression
    Has turned your once proud nation
    Into a global joke

    Wake up Americans

    Please

    PLEASE

    Wake up

    Get up of your fat complacent asses
    Look around you
    And see
    See
    The threat
    The very real threat
    Of your own government
    Looming over you

    Or it will be you
    And your children
    And your children’s children
    Who will live
    Forever
    Under the yolk
    Of

    OPPRESSION

    5000 dead Americans in Iraq

    How many more

    Will be flushed away

    Down with the promises

    Of

    Obama’s Toilet


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    The very thing
    The very thing

    Your ancestors fought against

    The very reason why

    You won your INDEPENDENCE

    Please America

    Americans

    Please

    Don’t let their struggle

    Be
    In
    Vain

    Listen to the last speech of your hero

    J.F.K






























    Things are ok here in Tampa after the big move

    Need to get the message out there somehow Col
    Post this as soon as you can

    Stay well my friend

    We’ll meet on the other side

    Steve




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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow....... Wow... i've been disappointed as well

    Jackz

    Nicely written
    | Posted on 2010-01-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      excellent. That's all that is needed to be said.
    | Posted on 2009-12-31 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      He let me down, too. Seriously... about 40 stories underground Down.

    Nice poem for a bad situation.
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by stonewashblues | [ Reply to This ]


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