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    dots Submission Name: Caterpillardots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    19/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 451/419/172
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 848
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsCaterpillardots
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    I wonder if the caterpillar,
    fears metamorphis?
    If it fills his dreams?
    And in a fitful sleep,
    he weaves his cocoon?
    The darkness inside,
    pushes him forward,
    until he emerges with wings?






    Submitted on 2009-12-16 11:40:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The caterpiller doesn't think. IT just does what it MUST DO.
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 00:00:00 | by SAGITTREVEALED | [ Reply to This ]
      poor caterpillar is only worried he will be lunch to some pretty bird...
    | Posted on 2009-12-16 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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